Merging photos

In this image I attempted Fong Qi Wei's technique of merging the images with a series of panels. There is a lot going on in this image, therefore I found it difficult to focus in on one area. After discussions with my tutor, I agree that this techniques is not necessarily showing different times in the space but rather that the space has different times. What I get from this is the fact that the image isn't about time but about the scene. Putting the image together, not focusing on an order of time, but rather a particular element of the scene makes it about the image rather then the times captured in the image.